From 044926f568c7dbc664f4751e2b12fe4952b1c952 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Ian Dunn <iandunn@git.wordpress.org>
Date: Thu, 3 May 2018 00:06:48 +0000
Subject: [PATCH] Privacy: Revise Privacy Policy page text to avoid
 misunderstanding.

The previous sentence was gramatically awkward, and using the term "compliance" could accidentally be mistaken by a site owner for a promise by WordPress that their site will be compliant after using the tool, which is not necessarily true.

Props idea15, allendav, azaozz, iandunn.
See #43435.


git-svn-id: https://develop.svn.wordpress.org/trunk@43131 602fd350-edb4-49c9-b593-d223f7449a82
---
 src/wp-admin/privacy.php | 2 +-
 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)

diff --git a/src/wp-admin/privacy.php b/src/wp-admin/privacy.php
index 1d17f0f5f0..4deb4443c6 100644
--- a/src/wp-admin/privacy.php
+++ b/src/wp-admin/privacy.php
@@ -127,7 +127,7 @@ require_once( ABSPATH . 'wp-admin/admin-header.php' );
 	<?php settings_errors(); ?>
 	<h2><?php _e( 'Privacy Policy page' ); ?></h2>
 	<p>
-		<?php _e( 'The first step towards privacy laws compliance is to have a comprehensive Privacy Policy.' ); ?>
+		<?php _e( 'As a website owner, you may need to follow national or international privacy laws. For example, you may need to create and display a privacy policy.' ); ?>
 		<?php _e( 'If you already have a Privacy Policy page, please select it below. If not, create one.' ); ?>
 	</p>
 	<p>