From 288f5234e9273648c9a13bb5025c80f942eaaf7b Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Sergey Biryukov <sergeybiryukov@git.wordpress.org>
Date: Tue, 3 Mar 2020 11:20:00 +0000
Subject: [PATCH] Site Health: Improve the strings in Site Health Status
 dashboard widget.

Follow-up to [47063].

Props dlh.
Fixes #49562.

git-svn-id: https://develop.svn.wordpress.org/trunk@47413 602fd350-edb4-49c9-b593-d223f7449a82
---
 src/wp-admin/includes/dashboard.php | 17 ++++++++---------
 1 file changed, 8 insertions(+), 9 deletions(-)

diff --git a/src/wp-admin/includes/dashboard.php b/src/wp-admin/includes/dashboard.php
index 87c86cc5c3..b3b60cab13 100644
--- a/src/wp-admin/includes/dashboard.php
+++ b/src/wp-admin/includes/dashboard.php
@@ -1814,28 +1814,23 @@ function wp_dashboard_site_health() {
 	</div>
 
 	<?php if ( false === $get_issues ) : ?>
-		<p>
-			<?php _e( 'No Site Health information has been gathered yet, you can do so by visiting the Site Health screen, alternatively the checks will run periodically.' ); ?>
-		</p>
-
 		<p>
 			<?php
 			printf(
 				/* translators: %s: URL to Site Health screen. */
-				__( '<a href="%s">Visit the Site Health screen</a> to gather information on about your site.' ),
+				__( 'Site health checks will automatically run periodically to gather information about your site. You can also <a href="%s">visit the Site Health screen</a> to gather information on about your site now.' ),
 				esc_url( admin_url( 'site-health.php' ) )
 			);
 			?>
 		</p>
-
 	<?php else : ?>
 		<p>
 			<?php if ( $issue_counts['critical'] > 0 ) : ?>
-				<?php _e( 'Your site has critical issues that should be addressed as soon as possible to improve the performance or security of your website.' ); ?>
+				<?php _e( 'Your site has critical issues that should be addressed as soon as possible to improve its performance and security.' ); ?>
 			<?php elseif ( $issues_total <= 0 ) : ?>
 				<?php _e( 'Great job! Your site currently passes all site health checks.' ); ?>
 			<?php else : ?>
-				<?php _e( 'Your site health is looking quite good, but there are still some things you can do to improve the performance and security of your website.' ); ?>
+				<?php _e( 'Your site&#8217;s health is looking good, but there are still some things you can do to improve its performance and security.' ); ?>
 			<?php endif; ?>
 		</p>
 	<?php endif; ?>
@@ -1845,7 +1840,11 @@ function wp_dashboard_site_health() {
 			<?php
 			printf(
 				/* translators: 1: Number of issues. 2: URL to Site Health screen. */
-				__( 'Take a look at the <strong>%1$d items</strong> on the <a href="%2$s">Site Health Status screen</a>.' ),
+				_n(
+					'Take a look at the <strong>%1$d item</strong> on the <a href="%2$s">Site Health screen</a>.',
+					'Take a look at the <strong>%1$d items</strong> on the <a href="%2$s">Site Health screen</a>.',
+					$issues_total
+				),
 				$issues_total,
 				esc_url( admin_url( 'site-health.php' ) )
 			);