diff --git a/wp-admin/credits.php b/wp-admin/credits.php
index 5249e1181b..7052357b8b 100644
--- a/wp-admin/credits.php
+++ b/wp-admin/credits.php
@@ -52,7 +52,7 @@ include( ABSPATH . 'wp-admin/admin-header.php' );
 
 <h1><?php printf( __( 'Welcome to WordPress %s' ), $display_version ); ?></h1>
 
-<div class="about-text"><?php printf( __( 'Thank you for updating to the latest version! WordPress %s is more polished and enjoyable than ever before. We hope you like it.' ), $display_version ); ?></div>
+<div class="about-text"><?php printf( __( 'Thank you for updating to the latest version. WordPress %s makes your writing experience even better.' ), $display_version ); ?></div>
 
 <div class="wp-badge"><?php printf( __( 'Version %s' ), $display_version ); ?></div>
 
diff --git a/wp-admin/css/wp-admin.css b/wp-admin/css/wp-admin.css
index ea54c69afc..70e9afed19 100644
--- a/wp-admin/css/wp-admin.css
+++ b/wp-admin/css/wp-admin.css
@@ -6018,7 +6018,7 @@ h2 .nav-tab {
 
 .about-wrap ul.wp-people-group {
 	overflow: hidden;
-	padding: 5px;
+	padding: 0 5px;
 	margin: 0 -15px 0 -5px;
 }
 
diff --git a/wp-admin/freedoms.php b/wp-admin/freedoms.php
index d7dab73135..d7accd1b5a 100644
--- a/wp-admin/freedoms.php
+++ b/wp-admin/freedoms.php
@@ -19,7 +19,7 @@ include( ABSPATH . 'wp-admin/admin-header.php' );
 
 <h1><?php printf( __( 'Welcome to WordPress %s' ), $display_version ); ?></h1>
 
-<div class="about-text"><?php printf( __( 'Thank you for updating to the latest version! WordPress %s is more polished and enjoyable than ever before. We hope you like it.' ), $display_version ); ?></div>
+<div class="about-text"><?php printf( __( 'Thank you for updating to the latest version. WordPress %s makes your writing experience even better.' ), $display_version ); ?></div>
 
 <div class="wp-badge"><?php printf( __( 'Version %s' ), $display_version ); ?></div>