diff --git a/src/wp-admin/credits.php b/src/wp-admin/credits.php
index 6d4eae1064..c99bc2ff40 100644
--- a/src/wp-admin/credits.php
+++ b/src/wp-admin/credits.php
@@ -82,7 +82,7 @@ include( ABSPATH . 'wp-admin/admin-header.php' );
 
 <h1><?php printf( __( 'Welcome to WordPress %s' ), $display_version ); ?></h1>
 
-<div class="about-text"><?php printf( __( 'Thank you for updating to WordPress %s, the most beautiful WordPress&nbsp;yet.' ), $display_version ); ?></div>
+<div class="about-text"><?php printf( __( 'Thank you for updating! WordPress %s brings you a smoother writing and management experience.' ), $display_version ); ?></div>
 
 <div class="wp-badge"><?php printf( __( 'Version %s' ), $display_version ); ?></div>
 
diff --git a/src/wp-admin/freedoms.php b/src/wp-admin/freedoms.php
index fa6728a0a2..101c7969d5 100644
--- a/src/wp-admin/freedoms.php
+++ b/src/wp-admin/freedoms.php
@@ -19,7 +19,7 @@ include( ABSPATH . 'wp-admin/admin-header.php' );
 
 <h1><?php printf( __( 'Welcome to WordPress %s' ), $display_version ); ?></h1>
 
-<div class="about-text"><?php printf( __( 'Thank you for updating to WordPress %s, the most beautiful WordPress&nbsp;yet.' ), $display_version ); ?></div>
+<div class="about-text"><?php printf( __( 'Thank you for updating! WordPress %s brings you a smoother writing and management experience.' ), $display_version ); ?></div>
 
 <div class="wp-badge"><?php printf( __( 'Version %s' ), $display_version ); ?></div>