From 5d2038c8cd76415b1798ca606de6bc47395bb7e5 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Helen Hou-Sandi <helen@git.wordpress.org>
Date: Thu, 28 Aug 2014 17:52:16 +0000
Subject: [PATCH] Sync tagline from about page with credits and freedoms.

props rickalee.
fixes #29409.


git-svn-id: https://develop.svn.wordpress.org/trunk@29652 602fd350-edb4-49c9-b593-d223f7449a82
---
 src/wp-admin/credits.php  | 2 +-
 src/wp-admin/freedoms.php | 2 +-
 2 files changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)

diff --git a/src/wp-admin/credits.php b/src/wp-admin/credits.php
index 6d4eae1064..c99bc2ff40 100644
--- a/src/wp-admin/credits.php
+++ b/src/wp-admin/credits.php
@@ -82,7 +82,7 @@ include( ABSPATH . 'wp-admin/admin-header.php' );
 
 <h1><?php printf( __( 'Welcome to WordPress %s' ), $display_version ); ?></h1>
 
-<div class="about-text"><?php printf( __( 'Thank you for updating to WordPress %s, the most beautiful WordPress&nbsp;yet.' ), $display_version ); ?></div>
+<div class="about-text"><?php printf( __( 'Thank you for updating! WordPress %s brings you a smoother writing and management experience.' ), $display_version ); ?></div>
 
 <div class="wp-badge"><?php printf( __( 'Version %s' ), $display_version ); ?></div>
 
diff --git a/src/wp-admin/freedoms.php b/src/wp-admin/freedoms.php
index fa6728a0a2..101c7969d5 100644
--- a/src/wp-admin/freedoms.php
+++ b/src/wp-admin/freedoms.php
@@ -19,7 +19,7 @@ include( ABSPATH . 'wp-admin/admin-header.php' );
 
 <h1><?php printf( __( 'Welcome to WordPress %s' ), $display_version ); ?></h1>
 
-<div class="about-text"><?php printf( __( 'Thank you for updating to WordPress %s, the most beautiful WordPress&nbsp;yet.' ), $display_version ); ?></div>
+<div class="about-text"><?php printf( __( 'Thank you for updating! WordPress %s brings you a smoother writing and management experience.' ), $display_version ); ?></div>
 
 <div class="wp-badge"><?php printf( __( 'Version %s' ), $display_version ); ?></div>