From a322b9479da78be48a6be36e1ab6052507ec4852 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Sergey Biryukov <sergeybiryukov@git.wordpress.org>
Date: Thu, 10 May 2018 16:11:38 +0000
Subject: [PATCH] Privacy: Tweak Privacy Policy page intro text for clarity.

Props macbookandrew, allendav.
See #43933.

git-svn-id: https://develop.svn.wordpress.org/trunk@43218 602fd350-edb4-49c9-b593-d223f7449a82
---
 src/wp-admin/privacy.php | 6 +++---
 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-)

diff --git a/src/wp-admin/privacy.php b/src/wp-admin/privacy.php
index 41d2d4c1d1..7e8801235c 100644
--- a/src/wp-admin/privacy.php
+++ b/src/wp-admin/privacy.php
@@ -106,15 +106,15 @@ require_once( ABSPATH . 'wp-admin/admin-header.php' );
 	<h2><?php _e( 'Privacy Policy page' ); ?></h2>
 	<p>
 		<?php _e( 'As a website owner, you may need to follow national or international privacy laws. For example, you may need to create and display a privacy policy.' ); ?>
-		<?php _e( 'If you already have a privacy policy page, please select it below. If not, create one.' ); ?>
+		<?php _e( 'If you already have a privacy policy page, please select it below. If not, please create one.' ); ?>
 	</p>
 	<p>
 		<?php _e( 'The new page will include help and suggestions for your privacy policy.' ); ?>
 		<?php _e( 'However, it is your responsibility to use those resources correctly, to provide the information that your privacy policy requires, and to keep that information current and accurate.' ); ?>
 	</p>
 	<p>
-		<?php _e( 'After your privacy policy page is set, we suggest that you edit it. On the edit page screen you will find additional privacy information added by your themes and plugins.' ); ?>
-		<?php _e( 'We would also suggest reviewing your privacy policy from time to time, especially after an update. There may be changes or new suggested information for you to consider adding to your policy.' ); ?>
+		<?php _e( 'After your privacy policy page is set, we suggest that you edit it.' ); ?>
+		<?php _e( 'We would also suggest reviewing your privacy policy from time to time, especially after installing or updating any themes or plugins. There may be changes or new suggested information for you to consider adding to your policy.' ); ?>
 	</p>
 	<?php