From a71a815a0ca9c825c15786d6e55d80d68d639c11 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Helen Hou-Sandi <helen@git.wordpress.org>
Date: Wed, 15 Apr 2015 17:33:11 +0000
Subject: [PATCH] About page: A last round of text updates.

props DrewAPicture, johnbillion, afercia, helen.
see #31929.


git-svn-id: https://develop.svn.wordpress.org/trunk@32135 602fd350-edb4-49c9-b593-d223f7449a82
---
 src/wp-admin/about.php | 41 +++++++++++++++++++++--------------------
 1 file changed, 21 insertions(+), 20 deletions(-)

diff --git a/src/wp-admin/about.php b/src/wp-admin/about.php
index 7de19a270d..a4b0ab73e3 100644
--- a/src/wp-admin/about.php
+++ b/src/wp-admin/about.php
@@ -44,14 +44,15 @@ include( ABSPATH . 'wp-admin/admin-header.php' );
 <div class="changelog headline-feature dfw">
 	<h2>[video]</h2>
 
-	<h2><?php echo ( 'An easier way to share content' ); ?></h2>
 	<div class="feature-section">
 		<div class="dfw-container">
 			<img src="//s.w.org/images/core/4.1/focus.png" class="base-image" />
 		</div>
-		<h3><?php echo ( 'Press This Modernized' ); ?></h3>
-		<p><?php echo ( 'Clip it, edit it, publish it. Get familiar with the new and improved Press This. From the tools menu, add Press This to your browser bookmark bar or your mobile device home screen. Once installed you can share your content with lightning speed. Sharing your favorite videos, images, and content has never been this fast or this easy.' ); ?></p>
+		<h3><?php echo ( 'An easier way to share content' ); ?></h3>
+		<p><?php printf( 'Clip it, edit it, publish it. Get familiar with the new and improved Press This. From the <a href="%s">Tools</a> menu, add Press This to your browser bookmark bar or your mobile device home screen. Once installed you can share your content with lightning speed. Sharing your favorite videos, images, and content has never been this fast or this easy.', admin_url( 'tools.php' ) ); ?></p>
+		<p><?php _e( 'Drag the bookmarklet below to your bookmarks bar. Then, when you&#8217;re on a page you want to share, simply &#8220;press&#8221; it.' ); ?> [bookmarklet]</p>
 	</div>
+
 </div>
 
 <hr />
@@ -60,11 +61,11 @@ include( ABSPATH . 'wp-admin/admin-header.php' );
 
 	<div class="feature-section">
 		<div class="col">
-			<h3><?php echo ( 'Extended Character Support' ); ?></h3>
+			<h3><?php echo ( 'Extended character support' ); ?></h3>
 			<p><?php echo ( 'Writing in WordPress, whatever your language, just got better. WordPress 4.2 supports a host of new characters out-of-the-box, including native Chinese, Japanese, and Korean characters, musical and mathematical symbols, and hieroglyphs.' ); ?></p>
 			<p><?php
-				/* translators: 1: heart emoji, 2: kitten emoji, 3, monkey emoji, 4: ice-cream emoji, 5: Emoji Codex link */
-				printf( 'Don’t use special characters? You can still have fun &mdash; emoji are now available in WordPress! Get creative and decorate your content with %1$s, %2$s, %3$s, %4$s, and all the many other <a href="%5$s">emoji</a>.', '&#x1F499', '&#x1F408', '&#x1F412', '&#x1F366', __( 'https://codex.wordpress.org/Emoji' ) );
+				/* translators: 1: heart emoji, 2: frog face emoji, 3, monkey emoji, 4: pizza emoji, 5: Emoji Codex link */
+				printf( 'Don&#8217;t use any of those characters? You can still have fun &mdash; emoji are now available in WordPress! Get creative and decorate your content with %1$s, %2$s, %3$s, %4$s, and all the many other <a href="%5$s">emoji</a>.', '&#x1F499', '&#x1F438', '&#x1F412', '&#x1F355', __( 'https://codex.wordpress.org/Emoji' ) );
 			?></p>
 		</div>
 		<div class="col">
@@ -86,12 +87,11 @@ include( ABSPATH . 'wp-admin/admin-header.php' );
 				'ogv'      => '//s.w.org/images/core/3.9/widgets.ogv',
 				'webm'     => '//s.w.org/images/core/3.9/widgets.webm',
 				'loop'     => true,
-				'autoplay' => true,
 				'height'   => 218
 			) );
 			?>
-			<h4><?php echo ( 'Switch Themes in the Customizer' ); ?></h4>
-			<p><?php echo ( 'Browse and preview your installed themes from the Customizer. Make sure the theme looks just right with <em>your</em> content, before it debuts on your site. ' ); ?></p>
+			<h4><?php echo ( 'Switch themes in the Customizer' ); ?></h4>
+			<p><?php echo ( 'Browse and preview your installed themes from the Customizer. Make sure the theme looks great with <em>your</em> content, before it debuts on your site. ' ); ?></p>
 		</div>
 		<div>
 			<?php
@@ -100,12 +100,11 @@ include( ABSPATH . 'wp-admin/admin-header.php' );
 				'ogv'      => '//s.w.org/images/core/3.9/widgets.ogv',
 				'webm'     => '//s.w.org/images/core/3.9/widgets.webm',
 				'loop'     => true,
-				'autoplay' => true,
 				'height'   => 218
 			) );
 			?>
-			<h4><?php echo ( 'Even More Embeds' ); ?></h4>
-			<p><?php echo ( 'Paste links from Tumblr and Kickstarter and watch them magically appear right in the editor. With every release, your publishing and editing experience gets closer together.' ); ?></p>
+			<h4><?php echo ( 'Even more embeds' ); ?></h4>
+			<p><?php echo ( 'Paste links from Tumblr.com and Kickstarter and watch them magically appear right in the editor. With every release, your publishing and editing experience get closer together.' ); ?></p>
 		</div>
 		<div class="last-feature">
 			<?php
@@ -114,11 +113,10 @@ include( ABSPATH . 'wp-admin/admin-header.php' );
 				'ogv'      => '//s.w.org/images/core/3.9/widgets.ogv',
 				'webm'     => '//s.w.org/images/core/3.9/widgets.webm',
 				'loop'     => true,
-				'autoplay' => true,
 				'height'   => 218
 			) );
 			?>
-			<h4><?php echo ( 'Streamlined Plugin Updates' ); ?></h4>
+			<h4><?php echo ( 'Streamlined plugin updates' ); ?></h4>
 			<p><?php echo ( 'Goodbye boring loading screen, hello smooth and simple plugin updates. Just click <em>Update Now</em> and watch the magic happen.' ); ?></p>
 		</div>
 	</div>
@@ -131,17 +129,20 @@ include( ABSPATH . 'wp-admin/admin-header.php' );
 
 	<div class="feature-section col two-col">
 		<div>
-			<h4><?php echo ( 'utf8mb4 Support' ); ?></h4>
+			<h4><?php echo ( 'utf8mb4 support' ); ?></h4>
 			<p><?php echo ( 'Database character encoding has changed from utf8 to utf8mb4, which adds support for a whole range of new 4-byte characters.' ); ?></p>
 
-			<h4><?php echo ( 'JavaScript Accessibility' ); ?></h4>
-			<p><?php echo ( 'You can now send audible notifications to screen readers in JavaScript with <code>wp.a11y.speak()</code>. Pass it a string, and an update will be sent to the ARIA live notifications area.' ); ?></p>
+			<h4><?php echo ( 'JavaScript accessibility' ); ?></h4>
+			<p><?php echo ( 'You can now send audible notifications to screen readers in JavaScript with <code>wp.a11y.speak()</code>. Pass it a string, and an update will be sent to a dedicated ARIA live notifications area.' ); ?></p>
 		</div>
 		<div class="last-feature">
-			<h4><?php echo ( 'Taxonomy Roadmap' ); ?></h4>
-			<p><?php echo ( 'Terms previously shared across multiple taxonomies will be split when one of them is updated. A new row is created in the database for each.' ); ?></p>
+			<h4><?php echo ( 'Shared term splitting' ); ?></h4>
+			<p><?php
+				/* translators: 1: Term splitting guide link */
+				printf ( 'Terms shared across multiple taxonomies will be split when one of them is updated. Find out more in the <a href="%1$s">Plugin Developer Handbook.</a>', 'https://developer.wordpress.org/plugins/taxonomy/working-with-split-terms-in-wp-4-2/' );
+			?></p>
 
-			<h4><?php echo ( 'Complex Query Ordering' ); ?></h4>
+			<h4><?php echo ( 'Complex query ordering' ); ?></h4>
 			<p><?php echo ( '<code>WP_Query</code>, <code>WP_Comment_Query</code>, and <code>WP_User_Query</code> now support complex ordering with named meta query clauses.' ); ?></p>
 		</div>